Sunday, March 8, 2015

To Have Loved Mary Comments

Rating: 4.8

Today is Sunday and I'm going to the ocean
or maybe not. Definitely not doing the laundry
or maybe I will. Moss and even a small tree
grow in the rotten stubs of the pier pilings.
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Chinedu Dike 15 February 2018

Well conceived and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Robert.

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Mountain Man 21 June 2017

Ode to Mary the gracious girl with the curves, to have delighted with the time we have spent. O Mary.

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Pamela Sinicrope 13 June 2017

I like this poem that connects the seemingly unconnected....You start with a thought about laundry, then musings on moss, mosquitoes, and bacteria. Finally in the last stanza, you come back to yourself and the joy of being human. I like that last line and the title.

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Michael Morgan 08 March 2015

very catchy poem, collapsing the general to the specific

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Soumita Sarkar 08 March 2015

so sweet and soooooooo simple..........liked the earthly appeal.....so natural.....

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