TAPAN Saren
Paschim Medinipur, West Bengal, India
TAPAN Saren
Paschim Medinipur, West Bengal, India
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To Her
Rating: ★4.3
Till throbs my brittle heart
Will I love you, for I, faint I, am fastened to your pure love;
No cause is too fatal to keep our souls apart
And will love you untill I hear His call from above.
Oh, Distance is so flimsy as well—
Your beauteous mural (on my heart) couldn't erase,
And silence—a long, long day between us it did prevail—
Only dimmed the abiding memories with a bit haze.
Dear, Death is but a mere grabber—
Can only take my warm breath away—
But my love for you will breathe forever:
Here, in the verse of live words, timelessly it will stay.
Will I love you, for I, faint I, am fastened to your pure love;
No cause is too fatal to keep our souls apart
And will love you untill I hear His call from above.
Oh, Distance is so flimsy as well—
Your beauteous mural (on my heart) couldn't erase,
And silence—a long, long day between us it did prevail—
Only dimmed the abiding memories with a bit haze.
Dear, Death is but a mere grabber—
Can only take my warm breath away—
But my love for you will breathe forever:
Here, in the verse of live words, timelessly it will stay.
Friday, September 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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Dr Dillip K Swain
02 April 2018
Dear, Death is but a mere grabber—
Can only take my warm breath away—
But my love for you will breathe forever: ...I appreciate you expression! The use of - - - (Dash) pattern I find in Emily Dickinson's poetry! Excellent! Loved reading your poem!
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Wild Flower
15 April 2017
Very fine tapan. The last quatrain is very touching. Beautiful poem.
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Diane Montemayor
09 January 2017
You have a loving heart.....
Thanks for this beautiful and lovely poem of yours...
Sincerely,
Diane
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Rajnish Manga
08 November 2016
Absolute beauty. Well constructed with delicate expression and sweetly rhymed. True Love Wins.
]]] Death is but a mere grabber -
Can only take my warm breath away
But my love for you will breathe forever:
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Cigeng Zhang
20 October 2016
You voiced out your deep love to her very emotionally.The last two lines were very strong. A very beautiful work, I enjoyed reading it.
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Michael Walker
20 October 2016
I liked this eternal love poem and the images like ' I'm addicted to your
love', 'breathe forever'. A good rhyme scheme: abab, and neat quatrains.
M.Walker.
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Kanniappan Kanniappan
19 October 2016
Dear Tapan M. Saren,
Wonderful way of telling the true love; Keep it up.
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
19 October 2016
This poem finds love in its most complete
expression. Truly a magical write
Rated 10++
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Gajanan Mishra
18 October 2016
come on Tapan, love is the only truth in life. Go on loving, Love life. keep contact please.
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