Today Poem by JR Cuyam

Today

Rating: 5.0


Today is the day for another elegy
But today is also the day I'll celebrate
I will write of my sorrow and scream silently
And also, felicity, i'll encapsulate

This paper, I will fill with anguish
But my heart, I will tell to exult
Through this pen I will shed tears, bleed, and relinquish
But my lips will praise the Lord though it's difficult

I smell victory and it's mine for the taking
So, my pride I'll rip off even though i'm breaking
Today I'll forgive, love, and display kindness
Inking out my pain but I got warm fuzzies

Tuesday, September 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: forgiveness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 01 October 2015

These are lovely thoughts Cuyam! Though life has its share of sorrows and heart burns, it has its joys and blessings too! One who is able to see the silver lining even amid dark clouds will be a winner in life! i give you a 10

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Sranisha Francis 01 October 2015

Very wonderful... This paper, I will fill with anguish But my heart, I will tell to exult

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Denis Mair 30 September 2015

I feel you are trying to put so many feelings into this poem, but that is difficult to do. If you use your feelings to describe a situation and give readers a ringside view, maybe they can share the feelings of anguish and joy. I like the poems of Mary Oliver, because they tell by showing.

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Raymond Farrell 30 September 2015

In the face of all difficulty it is important to do what you have expressed in the last line of the second stanza, But my lips may praise the Lord though it is difficult. As long as we do this we will succeed by His grace.

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