Too Shattered Poem by JR Cuyam

Your title suggests you are not ready to recover yet from this loss. And I say: live in your grief and come to understand it, don't try to solve this crisis too soon, let it slowly fade as you write more poems expressing it. Your present poem vividly expresses a genuine human experience, so write more of them and you will helping yourself and others to deal with such loss. And your poems will be honest and valuable.

Intresting, thanks for the sharing

When a heart is broken there is only one course of action - pick up the pieces, put them back together as best you can, and get on with life. It won't be easy and it will take time. This is but another chapter in the story of your life. Who knows, the next chapter might bring a new love, even greater than the one you are now grieving. But there must always be hope that something wonderful is waiting just around the corner. This hope is what will help you turn the pages to the next chapter. This is a very effective poem, leaving the reader feeling your pain, and bearing it with you.

Poems written by broken hearted are deeply emotional, for the pain is felt to the very core of the human soul. The words written here are truly exceptional. Though its filled sadness, still, thank you for sharing this poem.

Steel heart is the best to wear, but now we gotta face shattered heart first...it will be one of the painful things to have in life..either we have to evolve to get the steel heart or left on the floor shattered forever... :)