Paris Hilton

Tom

You are fire,
i am the water,
together i shall sizzle you.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 1, 2006
Poem Edited: Monday, August 2, 2010

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Comments about Tom by Paris Hilton

  • Greenwolfe 1962 (2/9/2008 6:32:00 PM)

    I agree with the others, that your other stuff is garbage. But in
    candor and fairness, I must tell you, I have read much worse
    on here. 'Tom' is not a throwaway. Going by some of what I've
    seen, its only drawback is that it has your name attached to it.
    That gives everyone a free shot.
    Make up a name, do some more short stuff like this, post this
    one, and see what kind of comments you get then.


    Greenwolfe 1962

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  • James Niles (9/9/2007 7:20:00 PM)

    This is a genuine Haiku. To be authentic it should bear a reference to one of the four seasonings, pepper, salt, marijuana, tabasco. It has classical images, two of the four elements. I've forgotten, but a nun once told me how fire can sizzle in water and vice versa. This keeps people from falling off, when they reach the edge of the earth. Bye. Wonderful poem,123,1234,12345...And tomorrow we shall be six.

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  • Aere Blackwind (8/5/2007 1:18:00 AM)

    Or clearly the author had too much 'Firewater' when writing this poem.

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  • Anita Blake (8/5/2007 1:12:00 AM)

    yo i so argee with rocco.

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  • Wandering ScarletWandering Scarlet (8/5/2007 1:10:00 AM)

    man this sucks, its sixxling my brain reading this

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