In the supermarket car park
I parked my Kawasaki
400 ZRX, new and gleaming,
locked it took the key
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This is more mini-prose than poem, but I like it. An interaction with a stranger is often good fodder for creative writing.
Vwry touching. Not too late... someone else who needs the chat will come along. GS
Wonderful poem. I think sometimes the best conversations are the ones we have with strangers just as we are crossing paths whether it's the grocery store, park or at work. I love chatting with people (especially elderly) because I feel like they are such a fountain of wisdom and they love to give you all you'll listen to. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary
Lost opportunities are a wonderful topic for a poet, for there are so many in each of our lives. Thanks for reminding us of the importance of taking time. This is really nice. Raynette
Peter, this is a good one. I just wish you had listened to what the man had to say. But then, , it's never too late, next time, , i'm sure you will have a chat with someone and come up with other poem as beautiful as this one.