Well-meaning '10'
Forever when
I write good yarn
But golly gee darn
It's Not Registering!
I write about love
And the sky above
About Purple Rain
And the brilliant brain
But The '10's' Not Registering!
I write about President Trump
And kicking him in his big rump
I've made a video
About Justin Trudeau
But The 10's Not Registering!
Maybe rating meter's a bust
Or the '10's ain't a just must
Maybe my Poem Of The Day to-be
Will evacuate my soul's misery
But The 10's Not Registering!
Maybe the stubborn rating meter
Will recover when hell freezes over
Maybe Poem Hunter will get new technology
To put all of us out of our misery
Yeah The 10's Coming Alive
Right Back To Its Funky Jive
Not to worry at all dear Richard. The ten stars will register, surely......... : ) .....10
I'm starting to see them now! Oh, another one! And another! Geeta, to me, constructive criticism is much more important than even 10,000 stars. And I've been very fortunate to receive that from you, Sylvia and so many others!
Please, dear Richard, the TEN has been changed by FIVE, you may dance all night but no jive. Remember FIVE STARS, but NO WARS
Please, Sylvia, the '10' is a reference to the Top Ten. Like a music list. I was just having a little fun with this one. Can't always be too serious. However, I do like your jovial response!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I just clicked 5 stars. It worked and the voting was successful --- Happy time now!
Always happy with your responses, Geeta!