Topsy Turvy Poem by Juhaina Shiraz

Topsy Turvy

Rating: 5.0


All of the things I had planned for tonight
fell through the sky today,
and the moon turned crazy.
My lap is now empty,
and my heart echoes
the pain in the valley of silence
as I stand alone on the summit of a mountain
and count my steps back.

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Today the sky was hazy
and the moon became crazy,
and everything I had planned for tonight
fell to earth like a falling star.
My lap is now empty,
and my heart echoes the pain in the valley of silence,
and I am standing on the mountain top alone,
counting my steps back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 25 April 2023

Love this poem!

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S H 15 April 2023

Excellent presentation.

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Poetic Sky 14 April 2023

Class poem. Both forms are equally good.

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