Tinge On Tongue Poem by Juhaina Tumlu

Tinge On Tongue

Rating: 4.3


Left me with bitter taste
Your deleterious phrase
I can't brush them out
the return years after
they've been callously thrown
Like feathers floating in winds
Wounding my heart
Every now and then
And still, after all this
I am gathering my courage
To move forward
With the tinge on my tongue.

Sunday, January 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: hurt,life,philosophy,satire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 27 January 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Juhaina. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 January 2019

beautiful start with firSt TINGE DO READ MY POEM MOM'S SMILES

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 February 2019

I am gathering my courage To move forward With the tinge on my tongue. AND YES U MUST

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Li Su Pen 08 July 2021

Very wonderful poem. Thank you!

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M Asim Nehal 07 July 2021

Excellent poem, nicely composed.

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Chinedu Dike 28 August 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Johaina.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 August 2020

Like feathers floating in winds Wounding my heart Every now and then And still, after all this I am gathering my courage. a life that leads itself to determination because of all wounds and pain.a fine poem. tony

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Mihaela Pirjol 20 February 2019

I wrote a poem when I was younger: it is entitled " Ephemeral" . It was long before I knew what a haiku is, but it does express what your poem expresses.

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