Hanging In Shame - Love Poem by Juhaina Shiraz

You have exposed the peculiarity of the societal situations in this poem: it is time to cease absorbing the energy of the young!

When one leg in grave and another shaking Mind is hollow and heart missing some bite. And still they want to the nectar from beautiful flowers. Symbolic, and a very fine presentation and imagination. thank you dear poetess. tony

Mind is hollow and heart missing some bite. And still they want to the nectar from beautiful flowers. facts of life and experience..... very well written symbolically. tony

A profound and insightful bit of verse nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Loved it, though I should be counted among "the oldies"…

Very well written and true! I take my hat off, to you.

Incisive write. An astute observation on elderly behavior

very well penned insight poem, well done for this beautiful poetic masterpiece. I would say even they are old but may be still feeling young inside their hearts! 5 stars

Mind is hollow and heart missing some bite. And still they want to the nectar from beautiful flowers.