Demonic Angel

Rating: 5.0

he is calm
he rages within
across his bloody palm
a blade in hand
he controls his battalian
all at his command
his anger is fierce
his heart is beats warm
his armor was peirced
his blood makes him crazy
his blood creates a calm
th battle field blazing
sweat in his palm
if the battle is won
if the battle is lost
his struggles within
tears him apart
his love is fierce
but cant be denied
from the life within
hes lost his fight...

Chidori Storm 17 March 2010

Dude, I hope you aren't talking about yourself. Anyway, This is a very, very good poem. When are you going to write more. I'm getting a little impatient, sorry.

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Crazy Vampire 26 March 2010

i love ur poems they r really good... dont ever stop writing!

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a lot of hidden detail... love the idea of an evil angel...

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Christopher Tiganescu 17 March 2010

as intresting as it is well made very well done

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dang...this is a good poem...i loved reading it 10/10

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Iron Panda 23™ 17 March 2010 REALLY good! !

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