Total Failure Poem by Sandra Feldman

Total Failure

Rating: 3.7

Oh Love!
You have
So deeply
So thoroughly
Betrayed me,
Never really mine
From deep passion,
So devine!
Your warmth
Your, 'Joie de vivre'
Your glory, fine
That nothing
Can replace,
As emptiness
Becomes
A much more
Painful place.

Friday, January 10, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 January 2025

May your emptiness and pain be replaced with the glory of love; joy and peace. Happy New Year and may the Lord's grace fill our hearts and mind this 2025 and always. A wonderful and heartfelt poem as always.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 January 2025

Love has many colors. They come in bright and dark colors and in between. Yet, love at a given time always delivers bright colors that will give us great memories. A deeply touching and poignant poem of love.

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