Tuesday, January 31, 2017

Tough Girl Comments

Rating: 4.5

I wasn't born with a silver spoon in my mouth so i have to work for whatever i get.......
I have issues too, and sometimes i cry myself to sleep & my pillow is the only shoulder that i have to lean on..But i can't let it show, i can't let anyone know so i hide it all behind my smile
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Vanessa Phiri
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 March 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, Vanessa. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Kim Barney 31 January 2017

I really like this, Vanessa. You are right. Even when life is hard, that's no reason to stop living. I admire your courage. This appears to be the first poem that you have posted to this website. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Chinedu Dike 31 January 2017

Beautiful piece of poetry, insightfully brought forth in good diction with conviction. Lovely motivational poem. Thanks for sharing Vanessa.

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