Near a shrine in Japan he'd swept the pathand then placed camellia blossoms there.Or -- we had no way of knowing -- he'd swept the pathbetween fallen camellias.
Nice! Evokes that quality of Japan and Japanese culture that some of us are really drawn to.
smooth poem but with depth. Thank you
It makes a mockery of poetry. It's drivel from the lips of vanity.
I like this......Thank you: -)
The depth is surprisingly huges if you start really to think........... about the - after all - not at all simple words you wrote.
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he sweep it first then spread camellias
Very interesting. I enjoyed it.
Fairly boring but fairly interesting
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem »