Towards Sunset Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Towards Sunset
Towards sunset
Saturday,17th August 2019
Inching towards sunset
before it becomes too late
I set my course
to paint the life with memorable verses
I have closely watched
and reached
the level of self-satisfaction
with no reaction at all
Life has given everything
to bring
the inner voice on the fore
it makes me feel no sore
life had been hard on the ground
but the way was always found
with such a ride in the right direction
that was to speak later on with no reaction
Life has shown all colors
with shades, scorching heat and moon's silver
that anyone may long in the life span
it is not over yet and I want more
Hasmukh Mehta
Feel no sore. Worthy of being the best of the best. Makes me feel no sore as well. Well I'm off To New Guinea to continue speaking my pidgin English. No more no sore today!
Life has given everything to bring the inner voice on the fore it makes me feel no sore.../// it's excellent expression Sir You look great
life had been hard on the ground but the way was always found with such a ride in the right direction that was to speak later on with no reaction- - An amazing write full of positive energy.. Yes, ground is hard, but always a way can be found.Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
Poem: 56477744 - Towards Sunset Member: Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair Comment: Life has shown all colors with shades, scorching heat and moon's silver that anyone may long in the life span it is not over yet and I want more.
Poem: 56477744 - Towards Sunset Member: Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair Many many congratulations Sir.These lines remind me Sarojini Naidu's " give me more to drink... Your caption is befitting. It is towards in the twilight everythings shines. Wishing you a very long life.. DPN
: 56477744 - Towards Sunset Member: Khairul Ahsan Comment: Loved this poem of fulfillment written by an accomplished poet of this site. Heartiest congratulations to the poet on his poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! It indeed is a poem of inspiration, to live life to its full, notwithstanding its ups and downs.
Poem: 56477744 - Towards Sunset Member: Anil Kumar Panda Comment: Great poem on the journey of life. The ups and downs one faces in its course is beautifully inked. 'Life has shown all colors with shades, scorching heat and moon's silver that anyone may long in the life span it is not over yet and I want more'.. is a beautiful stanza with full of hope and a will to face the challenges. Congrats
Life has shown all colors with shades, scorching heat and moon's silver that anyone may long in the life span it is not over yet and I want more. Many many congratulations Sir.These lines remind me Sarojini Naidu's " give me more to drink... Your caption is befitting. It is towards in the twilight everythings shines. Wishing you a very long life.. DPN " s
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4/26/2024 1:04:07 AM # 1.0.0.1119
'it is not over yet and I want more... Yes that is the spirit, with congrats for the POD, From one waiting for the sunset to another.