Thursday, October 13, 2011

Traces Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Anchored to nowhere,
Blank pages upon my mind,
A word or two of stillness,
Scribbled blindly in the fog...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Jacqui Broad 18 October 2011

Hi. Beautiful description of writer's block! And looking back at the time I've spent pondering, I'm sad to say it was all a wasted battle with words. Some things are not meant to be put on paper...

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Vipins Puthooran 15 October 2011

Wow, this's amazing, , the obsession of a poetic mind in the trap of time... Excellent poem...great write

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Shadow Girl 15 October 2011

I really enjoyed reading this intriguing and mysterious write...nice. -SG

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Ace Of Black Hearts 13 October 2011

Making them real. A sincerity at a attempt heal. A wounding night. Will bring upon the daylight Eyes once closed become open. A realisation of those who have been chosen. A relief in the knowledge bared. It is finally over. A disillusion has been beaten with one final stare. Thanks for sharing such an inspiring poem.

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

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