Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 493,986 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Traditional Link - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

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Buck up cheerfully
As mind is deeply
Involved in skirmishes
With fight to finishes

Nothing useful comes
But only inflames
Already troubled mind
For only ashes to find

So give no room’
And give up soon
Stand with alternative go
And successfully blow

The wind shall enter
And cater
Your craziness
To steer the course

So entertain
And maintain
Stable mind
With lot more to find

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Comments about Traditional Link by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/12/2015 11:59:00 PM)


    creative and constructive thoughts can emerge only in a stable calm mind.. build and maintain inner peace, let the unrest go.. thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/12/2015 10:31:00 PM)


    Maintaining stable mind is actually very important for peace of mind, tranquility and contentment. An unstable mind may invite a lot of hardships.
    Very realistic write. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/12/2015 6:57:00 PM)


    I thought about Jarthorst * the religion head of Iranians
    They landed at Gujarat port to be called as Indian
    This race has mixed with local people like sugar in milk
    Adopted new culture with their traditional link

    • The religious figure who migrated to India along with burning lamp*
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015



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