Upon the platform here I wait
And watch the rain come pouring down,
No other soul for company
To pass the time away,
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Lovely write Andrew, there is great rhythm in writing about the railways. they give one plenty of things to write about. This poem is great you have given excellent imagery, one can picture the whole scene. You might like to read my poem called 'The 6.15 from Paddington - Steam Days' if you have a moment. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
A powerfully captivating write Andy, brilliantly depicted! ! ! *10* Best regards, Friend Thad
Effulgent imagery & intrical depiction, highlights this tell-tale gem...Excellent Work, my friend! Always a pleasure to read quality verse such as yours. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
I felt the loneliness of this one Andrew, like feeling part of a by-gone age Your poetry shows such emotion Thankyou Love duncan X