Wednesday, March 19, 2008

Trainspotting Comments

Rating: 4.9

Upon the platform here I wait
And watch the rain come pouring down,
No other soul for company
To pass the time away,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Duncan Wyllie 26 March 2008

I felt the loneliness of this one Andrew, like feeling part of a by-gone age Your poetry shows such emotion Thankyou Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 19 March 2008

Lovely write Andrew, there is great rhythm in writing about the railways. they give one plenty of things to write about. This poem is great you have given excellent imagery, one can picture the whole scene. You might like to read my poem called 'The 6.15 from Paddington - Steam Days' if you have a moment. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 19 March 2008

A powerfully captivating write Andy, brilliantly depicted! ! ! *10* Best regards, Friend Thad

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Effulgent imagery & intrical depiction, highlights this tell-tale gem...Excellent Work, my friend! Always a pleasure to read quality verse such as yours. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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