Tranquility Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

Expressive and simultaneously impressive.Tranquility has your speech here..in reticent but resplendant verses..

The way and manner you use metaphors to unravel your stanzas is splendid; I love the way you apply alliterations; Your rhymes are not slant; I think you know what you are doing;

hmmmmm, nice but was thinking i u could make your writing a little bit simple...cause of the topic itself beckons for simplicity....hope u understand....

I like your expressive words dear friend.It moved a lot inside my heart.Thanks again for your invitation.

I really appreciate this poem. It makes me think of the Paradise earth that is yet to come, but will soon arrive. I feel like it brings out the idea of everything being peaceful and unified. We need more poems like this to remind us, that world conditions won't be like this forever. Jehovah God has promised us a beautiful, paradise earthly home, which we are sure to recive very soon. Love it! 10+10+10+10+10+10+10+10+10+10=100

Impressive write! Definitely enjoyed this piece! ! !

It does what it says on the box, and brings with the reading a feeling of wonderful tranquility. Nice work!

Very nice. A good poem

Fantastic wrote! Beautiful words have been used to compose this one!

it is very tranquil! what a nice piece..thanks for sharing!