Transactional Analysis Poem by Sidi Mahtrow

Transactional Analysis

Rating: 2.8


Took a seat next to a friend in the bar.
Greeted him with 'Hey'
To which he replied, 'Yeah'.
And we sat quietly sipping our beer.

I noticed he was twisting something
Between his thumb and forefinger.
Rolling it round and round a bit.
Nothing much else was going on.

So, I said, 'Interesting.'
To which he replied, 'Yeah.'
And we sat awhile.
And he held it up to the light.

Curiosity killed the cat, they say
So I asked, 'Could I see it.'
And he seemed surprised,
Unwilling to share it, I surmised.

Then after another sip of beer,
He offered it to me
So I could more clearly see.
Although, he seemed somewhat at a loss.

I took it carefully in my hand
And held it to the light
Yet I still did not understand,
What it was that held his interest.

So, I said, 'Don't think
I ever seen
The likes of it.'
And he said, 'Yeah.'

It had a soft texture
Pliable to the touch
And somewhat brown
But not too much.

'Interesting.' said I,
As I rolled it between
Thumb and forefinger
The way I had seen him do.
'Yeah.' Said he.

'Where'd you get it? '
I enquired as he finished his beer
And stood to go.

'My nose.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Thorkild Ellison 09 September 2008

Very funny! Freud would have accused him of masturbating, of course!

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Elysabeth Faslund 25 August 2007

This really is funny, on it's surface! ! ! But, what roles were you two playing? The friend, the questioner, the answerer? The story is very clear, clever, and down-to-earth, which has the reader following without a hitch. I think it was a joke he was playing on you...the kind of joke only good friends get away with! HA! People...what do you think? xxxElysabeth

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Francesca Johnson 03 July 2006

Ugh! .............. Love, Fran xx

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