Trashed Actions Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Trashed Actions

Rating: 5.0


Dumping dupes and their doings...
To screw all those viewing!
Removing this to sit,
With unresisting peace.
Bashed with rehashed dissatisfactions...
And attacked by false transactions?
Trashed actions of this kind...
Has brought a calmness to mind!
Finding in these times,
To do what's best and quickly!
And enjoy a life that comes.
When drastic measures must be done!
Stepping over temptations...
That once smothered in limitations!
And trashed actions of this kind...
Has brought a calmness to mind!
And no longer will a self destruction tease!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 11 January 2008

I find it so difficult to descibe just how much I enjoy your emotionally intelligent pieces Lawrence, I must say, your work it Brilliant* *= Stands out..in a profound way Love duncan X

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Scarlett Treat 11 January 2008

The sing-song repetitions and rhythms of this reminded me distinctly of Mr. Will's quote....'to be or not to be, that is the question...' and I liked it very much~~~

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