Trembling Thirst Poem by Mantu Mahakul

Trembling Thirst

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While a thirsty camel does not get water,
Still manages more for many days better.
Sweeter you feel the thirst after feeling,
Deer in desert in mirage runs in reeling.

Hot sand that drinks here who does link?
Short thirst comes when fishes in pond think.
Many feel thirsty for matters and money,
Some do drink salt sugar, water and honey?

Why does thirst come all do not understand,
Thirst drinks their hopes in clumsy road stand.
A thirsty man searches water up to far place,
Like rockets go far planets and search in space.

Wise people towards knowledge divert thirst,
They culture and adopt values and purity fast.
Godly wisdom becomes their water to drink,
In thirst to get God in meditation they do link.

Drop by drop they do drink nectar of nature,
Crop they do cultivate of virtue for far future.
God becomes their aim, learning and vision,
Oh dear people this thirst is of God's season.

Monday, September 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Although a thirsty camel does not get water, still manages many days more in better way. After feeling the thirst exactly you feel this sweeter. However a deer in desert runs in reeling behind mirage due to thirst. Who does link we do not know. But here deer drinks hot sand. When fishes in pond think at that time short thirst comes. For matters and money many feel thirsty and run behind. Some drink salty or sugar water and some drink too honey due to thirst. All most all people do not understand that why does thirst come. In clumsy road stand, their thirst drinks their hopes. Up to far and far place a thirsty man searches for water. It is just like rockets go far planets to search for existence of life and water in space. Wise people divert their thirst towards knowledge. In very fast they culture and adopt values and purity. For them Godly wisdom becomes water to drink. In meditation they link to get God in their thirst. Nectar of nature they do drink drop by drop. They also cultivate crop of virtue for far future. God becomes their aim, learning and vision. This thirst is of God's season, oh dear people." This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 01 November 2017

Wise people towards knowledge divert thirst, They culture and adopt values and purity fast. Godly wisdom becomes their water to drink, In thirst to get God in meditation they do link..................Beatiful stanza of a lovely poem.

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Abekah Emmanuel 23 September 2014

Wise people towards knowledge divert thirst, They culture and adopt values and purity fast. Godly wisdom becomes their water to drink, In thirst to get God in meditation they do link. Indeed, The prudence yearn for divine knowlege, for it is through that, they gain control over their human lives. They seek and practice moral values that bring peace and harmony to humanity. This is a beautiful with good rhymes... well written!

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 September 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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