True Beauty Leads To True Love (Comments, One On A Poem Of Dr. Swain And The Other On A Poem Of Dr. Theodore) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

True Beauty Leads To True Love (Comments, One On A Poem Of Dr. Swain And The Other On A Poem Of Dr. Theodore)

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Evening Prayer
I am close to the pink dawn in admiration,
I acknowledge nature at noon that I got courage to earn my bread,
I thank Her in the afternoon that I have taken my bread,
I kiss nature at the dusk while travelling to home,
I love the creator at night before I love my sweetheart.
Embedded in the Deepest Recess
When I surrender to love at the dawn,
a crescent appears on the skies of my blue body,
I work for my family and the crescent slips slowly
from the skies to the wet soil of my heart,
and when I expose my heart to my beloved,
she says, its beautiful,
wherefrom you brought this wonderful full moon,
I reply it's a reward of my surrender to love.
All lovely hearts lead to beauty,
and true beauty leads to true love.

Saturday, June 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: true love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Red Soul 30 June 2018

'All lovely hearts lead to beauty, and true beauty leads to true love.' Beautiful lines Jawad sahab. A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing: -)

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 June 2018

Physical beauty leads to physical love that is lost with the physical beauty.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

I love the creator at night before I love my sweetheart. ....... ......... ............. ............ All lovely hearts lead to beauty, and true beauty leads to true love........touching expression with lofty the.e. I love these lines. Beautiful poem.

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Robert Murray Smith 30 June 2018

You have your own unique write that leaves one spellbound. ++10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

Poetic comments are ode to the respective poets. True beauty and love are well reflected in true comments. A nice step of converting comments into poem is greatly. This poem is worthy one...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 July 2018

A wonderful spiritual write beautifully crafted. It conveys deep affirmation of faith. Loved the last two powerful lines.10+++++

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Simone Inez Harriman 30 June 2018

It certainly does! ! ! . What a lovely write. I loved the 'I got courage to earn my bread'. Immediately your poem resonated with me.10+++ and to my favourites (:

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 June 2018

All lovely hearts lead to beauty, and true beauty leads to true love. just incidentally I too picked up these two same lines as Sir KM JI It means the diamondic poet in thee

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

I love the creator at night before I love my sweetheart. ....... ......... ............. ............ All lovely hearts lead to beauty, and true beauty leads to true love........touching expression with lofty theme. I love these lines. Beautiful poem.

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