Trust Broken Poem by Paul Sebastian

Trust Broken

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Trust is broken
Lies were spoken
Friendship dies
My music dies
Lights go out
Painful rout
Trembling I grope
Dimmed hope
In dark loneliness
Shattered pieces
Day you lied
Day love died
Day I died

14.12.2015

Trust Broken
Monday, December 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,pain,trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 21 December 2015

Lies destroy the ways of love. Nice work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 December 2015

Betrayal by a trusted friend is always unbearable and shocking and very painful. But life must move on on a positive note that the betrayal could have been more devastating if the trust in that person had continued for some more time.More over, time is the anecdote that will reduce severity of the pain with it's passing. Regards.

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