Truthful Striking Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Truthful Striking

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Nothing changes except reality
When you come to know about ability
Here it prevents you from thinking high
Because nothing more you can try

We plan more in isolation
With no head and tail relation
But bogged down
When faces stiff resistance unknown

We claim ourselves to be of super class
With no parallel intelligence to chase
It gives no assurance or safety
But adds more and more anxiety

We want comfort of all kinds
But fail with test to find
It adds frustration to mental stress
With no option of medicines to suppress

We often boost of future security
But fail short of achieving in near vicinity
It gives impact on simple thinking
With no near vision of truthful striking

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 February 2015

Nothing changes except reality When you come to know about ability

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Panmelys Panmelys 13 February 2015

i suppose we all feel a little like this poet's portrayal, but not knowing what lies behind the essence of his thoughts whether he speaks of a personal distress, or a cultural stress, I hesitate to make a comment as to cause behind subject. He's obviously well liked as he heads the list, this shows he should be more cheerful to be alive, that's what more important. I see I'm not even on the first rung of the ladder, and yet I'm happy for this day, because it is. Panmelys

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 February 2015

Nothing changes except reality When you come to know about ability

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 February 2015

Nothing changes except reality When you come to know about ability

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 February 2015

Nothing changes except reality When you come to know about ability

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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