Turning A Pebble Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Turning A Pebble

Rating: 5.0


You're the Supreme being
You turn the universe of worlds
I'm just a child trying
To turn this little pebble.

Thursday, August 15, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 17 August 2013

A very humble and touching write. You have a beautiful way of putting words in action. Keep on turning the pebble of thoughts that will grow into a sturdy mountain. Loved it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 16 August 2013

Beautiful poem.....Before the Almighty we are all children...Turning a little pebble can do wonders..... Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 16 August 2013

Before the Supreme force, we are all foolish children trying to drain the sea in spoonfuls! !

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Dave Walker 16 August 2013

A beautiful little poem full of wisdom. A great write.

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David Wood 16 August 2013

Throw a pebble into a lake and the pebble and the lake changes but not you. A good poem.

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