Twilight Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Twilight

Rating: 5.0


Turn your eye
and don't look back,
the littered past
is long and black.

A twisted key?
A twisted lock?
A twist of fate...
a mental block?

An ever cautious
mind moves on,
translates, then darkens,
thrives upon
its own oppression
deep and stark,
yet yearning for
the lively spark.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alexander Coppedge 30 March 2013

well written beautiful verse excellent art

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Lucifera Santez 03 August 2013

a very good write. :)

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Hazel Durham 29 May 2013

Let the past take care of itself, keep moving forward with passion and hope! ! Excellent write! !

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Sally P. P. 10 May 2020

Thankyou for your comment, Hazel.

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Paul Brookes 21 April 2013

|Look back not with regret but boldly forward with hope. Great poem Thanks for sharing

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Sally P. P. 10 May 2020

Hi, Paul. Nice to hear from you.

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Kevin Halls 31 March 2013

A very deep poem Sally but interesting and thought provoking.

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sallyP. P. 10 May 2020

Nice to hear from you, Kev. Thanks.

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Valerie Dohren 30 March 2013

Brilliant poem Sally, reflecting on the past is often painful. Really good write.

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Sally P. P. 10 May 2020

Hi, Valerie. Thanks for your most welcome comment. x

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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