Twilight Poem by Linda Ori

Twilight

Rating: 3.9


Time passes.....
And still we fail to see
How brief is our mortality;
Days flow
In habitual, mindless haze
Yet always aware
In unconsious ways-
The clock ticks on;
The sun rises,
The sun sets-
Another day lost forever
And still we fail to see
How brief is our mortality;
The baby cries,
The old man dies-
Birth and death,
Life's accomplishments along the way
Mark time by memories;
Always tomorrow comes
Unbidden, endless days
And still we fail to see
How brief is our mortality;
Awake! Toss back the covers of indifference-
Breathe the fragrance of existence,
Savor the banquet of Life,
Visualize the inner beauty of creation-
Listen with a passion of the heart
And feel from the depths of the soul,
For this is our mortality.....
No matter how brief.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trade Martin 06 June 2009

Very well done Linda. You're a terriffic writer.....! ! ! Keep up the great work. Best regards, Trade.

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Charles M Moore 21 May 2006

Beautiful and lyrical obsevation on the passing of ages, quite complete.

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AH, THE DARK SIDE..SHINES SO EVERBRIGHT WITH YOUR MASTERFULL IMAGERY...DOCTOR SAYS: TEN er 'UP! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Nimal Dunuhinga 01 April 2006

Excellent! the sadest and the brief light...........at the end? An inner cry.

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