Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Gold Star - 8,493 Points (Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Twisted Day - Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

As morning arrives we do see
The breeze we feel sings bee.
Twisting time speaks about day,
We think and think and soon say.

Leaves fall from tree
The hope comes again
To give birth to new leaves
Trees feel cheerfulness
To regain life they think
In another term they stand
On ground leaves fall
Taking compost trees grow tall.

Feel fragrance of flowers you see,
Butterflies adore, flies honey bee.
Sun raises morning tribute does pay,
Twisting time brings rightful day.

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death, nature, spiritual

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is written at early morning with observation of starting of new day and life flows accordingly. Trees grow tall on new generation. Life is renewed undergoing rebirth and death. The symbols are leaves in nature. Only we need to feel this with deep breeze. Thinking on this we realize the twisting of time that brings right day of light in life. This is written in Odisha and dedicated to the people of the world.

Comments about Twisted Day by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

  • Alesia Leach (9/11/2015 7:18:00 PM)

    The circle of life. Great imagery. A wonderful poem! ! (Report) Reply

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  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (9/2/2015 1:45:00 AM)

    A very lovely imagery poem, fresh new day poetically sketched in words. Nice to meet the wife of Poet Mahakul!
    Pls do coment my latest poem on Sir Kalam.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/1/2015 5:34:00 AM)

    We think! With the muse of life playing around us. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (8/31/2015 11:31:00 PM)

    Truly, old leaves fall and new take their place like our sorrows replaced by joy
    The morning with its fragrance and color of new leaf sprouts our life
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  • Gajanan Mishra (8/31/2015 9:19:00 PM)

    the sun does pay.. good one.. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (8/31/2015 9:17:00 PM)

    The poem radiates a message of hope in the shape of the dawn of a new day, regeneration of the forces of nature seen in trees which rejoice at getting new leaves to replace the outgrown ones. This is all very beautiful- the early morning scene. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2015

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