Two Men I Met Today Poem by salu salu

Two Men I Met Today

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Two men I met today
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He spent twenty minutes for me
Guiding me to the place where I wanna
a place very remote and i’m ignorant
He slit a paper and drew a graph
I didn’t understand yet but he never quit
making me familiar to all the curves,
hills and dales, signals and sites.
Still I lost all the ways, but
Finally, I am at destination.

And wanna back home
It’s a labyrinth you’ll lose
I was groping around……..
An old man came in help
Took much pressure to guide me
To right path, to my cosy little home.
I can’t forget his smiling face
With a waving hand in
Wiining me leading to the right path.
sparing his precious time for a stranger
How magnanimous the men around
Strengthen me the belief of humanity
There r people destined lead to success
There r tender hearts, with lovely spirits
I promise I must do something n return.
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salu

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salu Salu 21 January 2009

for salu salu the world has changed. and new adages are worded: a friend in need is a friend to avoid. do unto others first before others do unto you. and the truth has taken the shades of the rainbow what is good for the gander need not be good for the goose but we can force it despite an oppression of taste and culture one must take shelter in the shadow of the self otherwise one gets lost in the labyrinths of others. RIC S. BASTASA

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Maxim Muyu 20 January 2009

Great description, making hearts like and admire this attributes we treasure like kindness, surely it's an Inspiration and a good thought.

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C. P. Sharma 14 January 2009

Beautiful poem. I loved the following lines: 'How magnanimous the men around Strengthen me the belief of humanity' CP

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Tsira Goge 14 January 2009

Simply remarkably......10... Thank you, salu Kindest regards, Tsira

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Anjali Sinha 12 January 2009

'promise I must do something n return'. This is a very good thought-- nice poem anjali

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Abdul Athani 28 September 2009

its a nice poem 10+++

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

How magnanimous the men around Strengthen me the belief of humanity Rachel Ann Butler

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Lee Crowell 30 April 2009

the originality here is refreshing, intelligent ideas mixed with simple symbolics

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Sandhya S N 12 March 2009

Dear, A small theme- well written. But could be more beautiful, if used less words some more apropriate. Try when U get time regards Sandhya

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Ershad Mazumder 27 January 2009

Good compose with an ordinary theme. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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