Two men I met today
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He spent twenty minutes for me
Guiding me to the place where I wanna
a place very remote and i’m ignorant
He slit a paper and drew a graph
I didn’t understand yet but he never quit
making me familiar to all the curves,
hills and dales, signals and sites.
Still I lost all the ways, but
Finally, I am at destination.
And wanna back home
It’s a labyrinth you’ll lose
I was groping around……..
An old man came in help
Took much pressure to guide me
To right path, to my cosy little home.
I can’t forget his smiling face
With a waving hand in
Wiining me leading to the right path.
sparing his precious time for a stranger
How magnanimous the men around
Strengthen me the belief of humanity
There r people destined lead to success
There r tender hearts, with lovely spirits
I promise I must do something n return.
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salu
strangers who are helpful are god in disguise...........nice write
A noble thought in noble way by a noble soul is written.10 marks
tow words i have to say 'great poem' there is hope after all bad thing just we must have faith, ,
How magnanimous the men around Strengthen me the belief of humanity Rachel Ann Butler
the originality here is refreshing, intelligent ideas mixed with simple symbolics
Dear, A small theme- well written. But could be more beautiful, if used less words some more apropriate. Try when U get time regards Sandhya
Good compose with an ordinary theme. Thanks a lot for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Goodness of the Heart, giving, a good feeling. Pass it around and it comes right back to you. Your Rewarded for thoughtfulness and kindness....10