Pithy Marvel

Two Opinions, But Only One Prevails! - Poem by Pithy Marvel

When there are two opinions
and one prevails,
the other one dies,
in a dark sea it sails

When one stands tall and in the sun
the other goes away...
and has no fun

There is always a loser when there is a winner
always one is right-eous and the other a sinner

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Two Opinions, But Only One Prevails! by Pithy Marvel

  • (7/13/2014 8:37:00 PM)

    Philosophically right,
    Poetically Perfect!
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    (7/14/2014 7:01:00 AM)

    Philosophically right? ? ? I doubt about that... like it is right that there is a winner and a loser? A sinner and a saint? Charming philosophy... not mine* *

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  • Neela Nath Das (7/2/2014 10:22:00 PM)

    Thought-provoking write! (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2014 3:34:00 PM)

    It seems that in this country now, anyone that thinks is a sinner. Will opinions still count?
    It's good you reduced the amount.
    Good work!
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  • (7/2/2014 2:53:00 PM)

    Great poem, but of course, this is just your opinion. Let me tell you what I think..... oh, never mind, ha! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 2, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, July 14, 2014

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