Spin chap!
Two sides are a coin.
Before the creditor's
hand or before the thief purloin.
Calm your weeping conscience
up again and stand.
Game! For chap,
two sides are a coin
sin? A subtler assent
makes it light.
Up and down, left and right our silly lives
are minted
but i pray the side
that lie
when i die
be the one sentimented
Lovely poem! ' but I pray the side that lie when I die be the one sentimented' Love the lines. Your poem reminded me of my own poem 'Like a coin'. Please read if you get a chance.
well written....in as much as the poem may seem simplistic...that fact that a coin could be employed to determine or decide a game gives this poem the deeper meaning that reviewers can only appreciate
Great write. I also pray that my side of the coin will be valuable to the creator on the last day
'be the one sentimented' One side shows the values and the other side shows the achievements of the Nation..Good
Interesting poem using a coin, chance, and value to make a rich ending. Very well written.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
both sides have got the same value. a brilliant poem.