Unclaimed Poem by SALINI NAIR

Unclaimed



This eve is abandoned itself
Lazy rays that desolate
Dust that shade and retreating
Open widows resonate sometimes

Open eyes glimpse wide eyes
Deserted alone in a corner
Dust covered and lifeless
Takes to the fathom of life trust

Animal life is liberal
Love hurts its path seldom
Relation never tie up anywhere
Loss life in a deserted corner

Pity alone in a crowd
Unclaimed and unaccustomed
Pull to the silence of emptiness
Curse of life that guaranteed

Boon of life admit itself
Loss life on the lap of a loved one
Priceless but worth more than gained
A peaceful voyage with a thrust! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, November 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
think of an unclaimed dead body....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 06 November 2014

Animal life is liberal Love hurts its path seldom There are so many pains in human life that are not seen in animals. A beautift, thoughtful write.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 November 2014

Boon of life admit itself Loss life on the lap of a loved one Priceless but worth more than gained A peaceful voyage with a thrust! well penned

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 November 2014

Very nicely composed with very touching words......a poignant write on the ultimate truth of life.......

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Valsa George 05 November 2014

Animal life is liberal Love hurts its path seldom Relation never tie up anywhere At times we feel that animal life is better than man's life! They are seldom hurt by the lack of love! Men sometimes are abandoned in life as well as in death! So sad!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 05 November 2014

Lazy rays that desolate, you open eyes with glimpse, pity alone in a crowd a man wanders and animal life is liberal than him. Very nice thrilling makes your poem living. Excellent touch given to this great work. May God bless you my daughter. Keep on writing marvellous poems.

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