Unemployed Comments

poignant write...your eloquent narration induces instant sympathy over each succeeding line...thanks...10

Andrew, you portray so well the frustration of the unemployed youth evoking imaginative sympathy in the hearrts of the readers. Your poetry is awesome, one wants more and more of it. CP

Well-told tale, I wanted to keep reading (but I was fearing an unhappy ending, so maybe it's better as is?) -chuck

Such poignant writing Andrew. This poem led me on a journey of possible hope for an unfortunate soul who had become a victim of circumstances. I hope there is a sequel to quench my thirst for more. The more you write, the more I like it. Excellent as usual. 10 love Karin

A Charlie Chaplin you have depicted at last it seems! Nice depiction!