Unfulfilled Yet Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Unfulfilled Yet

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I was waiting on this wayside for long
For a glimpse of you as you pass by in your chariot
Your carriage, at last, appeared at a distance
Amidst clouds of dust and fumes of fog

With tearful delight I rushed to thee
Against the thick surging mob advancing in festive procession
I failed and fell down, my yells subdued in sounds of singing and chanting,
Deafening crackers drums, foot steps and rattling wheels

Oh! Omnipresent, you remain invisible to all
My passion for seeing you is brimming up
I wish the warmth of your breath over my forehead

A desire for your Darshan fills my heart
Remove from these blind eyes darkness
And fill in thy celestial light to see your sparkle

Monday, October 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: prayer,prayers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 04 September 2020

poem for realisation

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Thank you for the comments. I consider it a great thing to be blessed with the faculty of realisation so far it is the capability to know the position of self in the vast universe

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Ramadas 13 December 2018

The poet could not fulfill his desire to have a darshan of the omnipresent, and omnipotent deity who passed on a chariot pulled on by frenzied mob. But still he is longing for the blissful experience to fill his heart. Hope his dream will come true! ! Good poem.

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Thank you Ramadas for the commrnts

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Leela kumari R 26 October 2018

Poet's ardent search for the 'celestial bliss'. Here we can see a 'Complete Man' resting everything at God. Great thinking!

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Thank you Leela for commenting on my spiritual aspirations

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Devi Krishnakumar 18 October 2018

A good one with a brilliant twist of words....

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Thank you Devi. Devotion to God is demanding always

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Ramesh Mekkadu 05 October 2018

Brilliant use of chariot to refer to passing time!

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Thank you Ramesh. Please rate the poem and vote

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