Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 398,227 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Unknown Factor - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Unknown factor keeps human being constantly in fear
They are seized with many problems and stressfully bear
Ready to strike with revenge but still address as dear
Experience pinch of salt when some sad news they hear

It is human psychology that drives and controls the nerve
In danger or crisis they take over and brilliantly serve
It is known fact that life is real but full of uncertainty
It will be sheer madness if we remain unknown about its futility

It gives joy and happiness as long as it is pleasant
No sorrow or grief is filled without His grace or consent
We tend to take little contingent of what the next will descend?
Unfortunate events or momentary drawbacks

Unforeseen situation may force us to turn to divine power
Prayers and offerings to God for blessings to shower
“Come to my fold and I shall “sound very much in ear
Force to rethink course of action when look back to years

Is it not the age old phenomenon that we have followed the same?
Is it not the brilliant idea of some one who has worked hard to frame?
The spirituous mystery that no one has tested or spoken so far
To take the advantage of human minds as so much weak they are

What will they do as last resort to come out of it and take refuge?
What can be simple remedy for acquiring new energy to infuse?
Why all of sudden it invades in mind that it may be end of world?
Why it shakes spine with fear, feet crumble and develop cold|?

No easy solution for complete dejection or burning inferno
Movement to stop with unexpected blockade of water flow
Reckless mind to stop thinking with no more ideas to grow
No where to go with hopeless situation and out of proportion to blow

These all factors drive them to the near vicinity of divinity
It is at this crucial juncture that they realize the power of infinity
It is borne in mind that life is another name of continuity
How much it is important to lead or to be lead in community

We need some overwhelming factor to guide our destiny
It makes us to rise in arms with powerful force for mutiny
Nothing on earth can force the intelligent approach of human being
It remain throughout same with ordinary man or powerful king

It may strengthen faith and belief
Which can only provide the relief?
It has nothing to do with fame or noun?
What else we need to calm down?


Comments about Unknown Factor by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (2/6/2010 9:28:00 PM)


    sir thankyou for sharing this wonderful piece with all.
    it reflects the depth of your thoughts and experience.
    valuable lesson to be learnt from this.
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/4/2010 7:38:00 PM)


    These all factors drive them to the near vicinity of divinity
    It is at this crucial juncture that they realize the power of infinity
    It is borne in mind that life is another name of continuity
    How much it is important to lead or to be lead in community

    Superb flow of words here.Outstanding.
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  • (2/4/2010 7:09:00 PM)


    Yes! True and genuine of your faith keeps life moving on..... I do believe
    of your words....something that holds us to go beyond the demarcation
    of each lines....it's a poem of great Faith and the philosophy of Fate that
    Lingerie in our lives...beautifully crafted...God bless..a 10 +++
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 3, 2010



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