our love is submitted
once we made a commitment
we share enemies
and we fight off plenty
together we're a dream
and not a bad can come between
down the line we come cross mistakes
tumble over our balances and breaks
our common likes we lost
and our looks we lost
emotions died out
faded memories dowed out
we share nights with others
romance and lust shared undercovers
back home we come together as one
till the morning our love os done
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I would like to translate this poem
Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.