Unseen air comes in and gets out of us
Doing some seen internal vital works
Supplying oxygen and removing poisons
Are among those life saving necessaries
Without causing problems but leaving thoughts
That catch the brain, swell heart and veins
With every entering and getting out breaths
Which a general brain can hardly guess.
Congratulations on this great poem, Dear poet, you have brought a great change in literature, You have brought scientific theories in literature, thanks for creating a new era in literature
our life force is dependent on what we breathe, scientists take note?
Unseen Force Seen Works is an excellent and classical poem im meaning
Unseen Force Seen Works is as interesting as full in wisdom, again congrat,
Unseen Force Seen Works one of the great octave poem in the world, thank you and congratulations on being day; s poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great write. You have succeeded using scientific allusion to acknowledge human physiology and the creator