Unsympathetic Mirrors Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Unsympathetic Mirrors

Rating: 5.0


Swirling winds
and rushing waves
across the angry sea
encompass me,
I must be a victim
of a tyrannical deity.

These are painful nights
void of stars,
we endure wounds
from poison arrows
that pierce the heart,
we're tragically torn apart
from each other
and our best intentions.

I must have failed to mention
I don't want to exist
in the darkness that conceals your eyes,
I don't want to breathe in the rain
of your prolonged absence.

I made a scarf out of your skirt
and a tourniquet, too,
but my lifeblood still seeped through
with no more value
than a ketchup puddle
from a broken bottle
on a grocery floor.

There is nothing more tragic
than daily survival when
there is nothing left to adore;
purposeless years remain
to sigh in unsympathetic mirrors
that only find relief
as you slowly walk away.

Saturday, January 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Sharp 21 February 2015

To me this was a good poem it meant a lot to me I have been fighting so long warding off forces unseen it does take a toil on you. I don't know but this poem reminded me of my fight against black magic and physic attack. The poem might not even be related, however, it made me think of my fight

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Susan Lacovara 28 January 2015

...we're tragically torn apart from each other and own best intentions... I have search for a way to express this all too real emotion. You have cast a light upon a darkness, that so many have waded through. Amazing poem, saved to my list of favorites. PEACE

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