Until Poem by Susheela Alexiose

Until

Rating: 4.7


Until I see you face to face
Until I feel you in the flesh

Until I fall into your arms
Until we unite as one

Until we burn in passionate love
Until we melt in the sweetness of it

Until you rest on my chest
This pain will not go! !

Sunday, February 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 28 February 2019

Yes, that certainly is love and passion, Susheela! : -)

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 February 2019

Until I see you face to face Until I feel you in the flesh.. this pain shall not go......... intense passion. here is poetic openeness. get away from all your inhibitions and try to be free when u write. you have that potential.. do it. then you will bring forth beautiful gems of poems. tony

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Anjana Nair 24 February 2019

Beautiful poem, very well written...gpd bless! !

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C F 24 February 2019

Until eternity you will wait it seems for your love that you long to hold. Nice expression of your sentiment.

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