Saturday, October 22, 2005

Until I Clung To Him

Rating: 4.7
A giant step to me it seemed,
Though not even a step to Him.
A painful effort to me it seemed,
A needless effort to Him.

A tiring walk to me it seemed,
A jolly good stroll to Him.
A huge mountain to me it seemed,
An abode of ants to Him.

A deep ocean to me it seemed,
A puddle of water to Him.
An endless sky to me it seemed,
A blue coloured ceiling to Him.

A great world to me it seemed,
A rounded footstool to Him.
So great difficulty to me it seemed,
Until I clung to Him.

Copyright © Christian Ratnam 2007
Christian Eliab Ratnam
Joe Breunig 14 October 2006
An interesting write; perhaps you would enjoy my poem 'White Flag', which has a similar theme.
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Jerry Hughes 14 January 2006
Christian, your faith is highly commendable, but it would be interesting to know what you feel on things less spiritual? Cheers, Jerry
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Michael Shepherd 22 October 2005
An original idea well carried out.
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