Mahfooz Ali

Rookie - 79 Points (28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

Until The End. - Poem by Mahfooz Ali

My heart and mind are one
joined in harmony,
they run to a place where field meets tree,
the smell of freedom engulfs me
and it feels like no sense imaginable.
My body is less tense,
Past tense is carried away on wings
built of so many dreams.
Love and hate,
are blown out by a calm breeze
that brushes against me like a gentle hand
taking me to another land
where I am united with true myself
until the end.


Comments about Until The End. by Mahfooz Ali

  • (11/16/2007 8:07:00 PM)


    Hi Mahfooz! As usual a very nice write, enjoyed reading it! ! *10 *! !
    Thad
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 16, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 25, 2011


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