Open Them Poem by Mahfooz Ali

Open Them

Rating: 3.1


Open them, open them
let the light shine,
Release the binds
of chains and twine.

Let spirit run free
let mind open its doors,
free of slavery
no more hard work and chores.

Perceive a life
with happiness and joy,
Equality and freedom
for every one.

Desire to be a part of it,
and now is opportunity to do so,
May express feelings
during the period
unlock window.

Run, fly, swim,
enjoy, delight in pleasure,
Reveal the beauty
The windows of Freedom encourage to treasure...

Thursday, May 21, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noha El3wdy 21 May 2009

indeed we need to open them otherwise we would kill them

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Bright Rose 21 May 2009

soooooooo well written, I really loved it, it's artistic and well written, you have a gift

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the windows of freedom...where the poets souls can soar..free un chained poem with flying wings...10+++

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SylvaOnyema Uba. 20 April 2018

Equality and freedom.

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Savita Tyagi 19 January 2016

Very refreshing. Thanks for sharing.

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Harivansh sharma 05 February 2015

A Lover of Liberty can write such poem..Love has no barriers,it is born free.

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Kesav Easwaran 25 May 2009

Good inspirational write...i liked the highly expressive line- 'desire to be a part of it'...10

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the windows of freedom...where the poets souls can soar..free un chained poem with flying wings...10+++

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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