Until The Stars Fade Away Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Until The Stars Fade Away

Rating: 4.0


Heart's love,
Heart's song,
Heart's joy! !
This love,
This sweet love,
Until the stars fade away!

Shade of love,
Made for you and i,
Place of joy! !
Passion and compassion,
Passing through life,
With righteous morals along the line,
This beautiful garden of love! !
This joy,
Until the stars fade away.

Friday, April 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Upendra Upm 13 April 2018

very beautifully captured a few aspect of ever eluding heart matter. And until the stars fade away, till the early morn.mind goes away in its entirety with your images of time, space and state of mind.Love is a now a sacrificial goat at the altar of correcting past wrongdoing, if you allow me to say that.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 April 2018

Love and art! ! ! This beautiful garden of love. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 April 2018

Shade of love, Made for you and i, Place of joy! ! Passion and compassion, Passing through life, With righteous morals along the line, .......amusing expression with nice theme. Brilliant.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 April 2018

Shade of love! ! Place of joy! Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 April 2018

Place of joy! ! With passion and compassion. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 April 2018

Eternality of love has been painted on the canvas of your wonderful poem. Well executed write.10

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