Untitled May Be Poem by Srijeeta Manna

Untitled May Be

Rating: 4.5


Sultry afternoon thoughts
give me some pleasure today.
Counting the leaves of the mysterious tree,
immortality fencing up my garden,
greenery of the wordly peace also fades away.

I listened to the footsteps quietly,
I felt you coming towards me.
Half asleep I listened may be
and half dead when i met u.

Love is a phoenix perhaps,
feathered with eternity.
You rise, you fall,
you injure me with your thoughts.
My wounds remain and remain;
even time cannot heal them
because only love grows with time
while hatred dies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sahil Sood 17 November 2012

a beautiful write.. I luvd reading the poem.. Great work..

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Prasanna Kumari 08 November 2012

however much we write on love, still there will be more to write....good poem

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David Gerardino 06 November 2012

better, , , , , you need to write with more feeling, , dig deep.

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Indranil Bhaduri 06 November 2012

Mindblowing expression penned in superb fashion. Loved this.

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