Ups And Downs Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Ups And Downs

Rating: 5.0


In my childhood I used to wonder,
why earth is not a single expanse
of plain land with all the greenery,
trees, shrubs that bore
fragrant colourful blossoms
tasty fruits and nuts
and flowers full of sweetest nectar.

My mother explained to me:
"it is like our life,
this moment you are happy,
the next, you may be not.
So there are hills, valleys, troughs
and big deep turbulent oceans
and mighty mountains immobile."

I did not understand
what she said then,
nor do I claim to know now.

But, looking back I think, my life
has explained it to me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Life's ups and downs….

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Why is life a single expanse of plains?

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Life explains everything

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 October 2022

Yes, it's so. Life teaches us many things as we grow up. This is an excellent poem. Top score!

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Rebecca Navarre 04 October 2022

And again Ever so very many Congratulations! .. On the best member poets! .. Awesome! ..

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Thank You, Becca. Much obliged

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Rebecca Navarre 04 October 2022

So true the ups and downs upon the roads in life! .. Ever so heartfully and beautifully expressed by your Mother too! .. Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++

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It is always a pleasure to read your comments on my poems, Becca. Thank You.

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Rebecca Navarre 04 October 2022

This is so awesome! .. And magnificently and beautifully expressed! ..

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Today I am ranked at Fifty One among the Best Member Poets on PoemHunter

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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