Variation Poem by A Voice in the Wilderness
Variation
Variation everywhere,
What colour is your hair?
Red, black or gray?
Just say,
What kind of ear lobe do you have?
A free lobe or an attached lobe,
either which is quiet bad,
Hitchhiker's thumb, thats what i have,
No, its not that bad,
well, maybe abit sad,
Cosidering i may have to ask for a ride from someone, hopefully not mad,
What colour are your eyes?
Brown, blue or purple?
Just keep it simple,
Yes, variation does include a dimple,
I like your poems. Instead of the dark stuff one usually reads yours are bright and light. May I suggest you tighten up on the use of i rather than I. Use that's rather than thats - which of course is wrong. These small quasi gramatical errors take away from the value of the poem.
plenty of variation here. i'm blue eyed and Nordic, I think.
this is beautiful and lovely i have noticed the depth of the meaning and now i feel satisfied. Well done
Dear Ruth, please listen to Micheal Round as I totally agreed with what he said.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/6/2024 6:59:56 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Certainly different - a variation to the usual type of poetry.