Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Veer Or Brave - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It is fortunate to have good friend
As it can turn out to be happy occasion at the end
And if that person is female and so caring
One can go in for friendship with daring

I am 'veer' she said with confidence
I interpreted it as brave at once
It was worth taking chance
I just observed her and had glance

She is vegetarian and takes chicken
Such events puzzle me more even
How can medico term it as literary term?
Now it was purely co incidence and my turn

If person eats chicken less than thrice in week
Then he or she fails to support or speak
She cane be strictly taken in vegetarian term
She makes me to understand and confides in simple term

Such lovely and nice friend she is
Very much bold with knowledge and full of trust
No second thought occur in mind
I loved her approach and efforts conveniently to find

She may talk endlessly
Put her views fearlessly
I must hear her readily
As I felt it too happily

I am troubled in relationship
As it has threatened companionship
I must face my problems bravely
She was little sore at and replied fairly

Any girl would love happy ending
As no force can compel her or make bending
Surrender to black mail or force to compromise
She uttered firmly' I must stand tall with promises'

Sikhs are warrior clan and stand for commitment
She belongs to martial race and feels it as proud moment
Model to self and standing tall on her own
She has every reason to feel make name known *


Comments about Veer Or Brave by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/23/2012 5:33:00 AM)


    Anuveer Kaur thank u so much ? 6 hours ago · Lik (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/23/2012 5:33:00 AM)


    Priya Singh So cute :) (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/23/2012 5:32:00 AM)


    Efe Light Sakpere Hmmm... U must b a 'loverman, ' a 'female-fan' (ur pictures being mostly females) . I like dis poem & i like d female in dis poem - she's brave, expresses herself fearlessly like me, lol.
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  • (5/22/2012 9:10:00 PM)


    When she offers you a wing of the chicken - [women] (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/22/2012 8:25:00 PM)


    It is fortunate to have good friend
    As it can turn out to be happy occasion at the end
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 23, 2012


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