Unforeseen calmness, your battered body is freezing,
Like a startled newborn, you are confused and helpless.
You don't know what you are, your senses are missing,
Earth lights are swiftly fading away into total darkness.
Rising from your carcass and looking down on it is easy,
Flying through a dark subway, you are searching for a light.
Familiar strangers cannot meet you; they all are busy,
To spot divine lights you're diving into the infinite night.
The ocean of emptiness is soundless, dusky and peaceful,
You don't cling to flashbacks about your departed home.
The angels keep guiding you in the direction that's needful
Unless you behold the celestial lights around the dome.
A refined poetic imagination, Aram S. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.
Except that this poem is created in mystical sphere, it also contains many metaphors, bit horrendous must I say, but that is of course to accentuate the content here. According to my shiverings while reading, I must admit that you are successful in doing so. A tiny bit on-nederlands. Thank you for sharing this worthy poem, worth for my innocent belief. A 10 for the poem. Sincerely, Sylvia Frances Chan (Nederland)
Mijn antwoord op jouw reactie: Graag gedaan, Aram. Ik heb er erg van genoten!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank you so much for your comment!